I feel like this voice come from space...I mean...like some spirtuality... I sense that in the poem... Reveals about writer's inner world... Golden words of wisdom... Couragement... Gentle voice asking you keep on holding when the wind are blowing us like kites in the air.

This is beautiful!

RL
Great job on this piece.

The sun may be eclipsed
And the darkness blinding
The cliff may be steep
But dear,keep on holding

I love this stanza. The love and encouragment can be felt in your words.

Let your courage speak
Patiently solve the riddles
Light is awaiting
At the end of darkest tunnel

This speaks so much. You can rise above all obstacles. You have to put forth the effort.

Firmly stand on ground
With ur head held high
Rays of hope will reveal
That success is nearby.

Love the entire poem. The message is awesome. The ending great :)

Love Cindy

It made me think that what ever you do there is always something greatful to come out of it, i have no idea if its saying it but thats what i thought, and its very true. this is a lovely poem you have wrote.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Nice poem. I like the hope.

Thank you for the comment on "The Road to Heaven"

The Angel of Secrets

BTW: I gave this a 5/5:)

"But dear,keep on holding"
-Hmm.. Yeah. I would say .. keep holding on instead.. because if you say keep on holding.. the reader may be questioned as to what you are holding on to? Keep holding on would be the best way to put it.

"With ur head held high"
-Oops. It looks like internet slang got ya. Just change ur to your. :)

Awesome poem overall. You used some excellent word choice and I loved your message. Great work, 5/5.

I loved this! I got the message that you were trying to send out and I thought the emtion of the poem was wonderful. Great job!!

Oh I just loved this. So positive and soo beautiful. Your words were inspirational and truly guide lost souls toward the light. Your coice of words were refreshing and not the same old same. The rhyming was great and not forcing making this easy and interesting to read. Well done *5/5*

I love this. Very encouraging. Like no matter what happens you need to keep holding on cos there will be a point of hope a long the way. Good work. I love it.

The sun may be eclipsed
And the darkness blinding
The cliff may be steep
But dear,keep on holding

that is a beautiful opening. the wording there just screams greatness. the imagery was good.
throughout the entire piece i smiled. you have true talent for matching words. great job! keep writing.

Lexie

Another well written poem.

Good motto within. "Hold your head up high."
For if we lose faith in the future there is no use getting there to begin with.

5/5

Great message.

An excellent write.A message very inspirational,in a beautiful flow.Keep it up.5/5.

Well this was inspiring..

keep it up..

best wishz... Karan

Lovely.
It had a beautiful beginning.

"Let your courage speak
Patiently solve the riddles"
^^Those words make me feel inspired.

The entire poem was motivating and reminded me that I should never give up.
It had a good flow and great word choice with good use of metaphor.
Its going in my favorites. :)

Very inspiring indeed. 5/5

I dont think ive ever seen a poem written with such beauty as this one. it is nothing less than amazing.

Very good poem. I think you could've taken it a little farther actually.
The flow was a little off. But it made sense and had a great message. good job!

4/5

This is a nice poem that my inspire some to take a deeper look into life...love the way it flowed and the words used.
5/5

This is such a good poem.. very inspiring.. after reading it .. it kinda made me more confident. i like this one. 5/5

Very positive message. Well done LR

I really liked your poem. It has a good messege. Very well written!