Hey! thks for ur reply..

very very touching! its really sad to know childrenl like Noshi.. i really hope i can do something to help children like her. very sad.. u did a great job writing this peom. keep up the good work!

Beautiful, there are some homeless people who live on the street outside my apartment. Among them is a young boy, who's eyes are also filled with light and with sadness.

Aww thats so sad :'( and to think there are actually people out there like that tears at my heart you did beautifully writting this poemand making her sound likean angel just made it that much sadder 5/5 nice =D

Very good work it's hard to make me cry and this peom made me cry it's really sad i love this peom!

Very nicly written way to get your point across .............cassandra

You have captured the fate of far too many children in far too many places in these strange times..

This is a really nice poem it crushes mine how do you put imagery into it like that cuz i felt like if i was looking this girl in the eyes and she was asking me for some food... im trying to learn how to put more imadry into it comment some of my pics and tell me some opinions please :)

AS I MENTION IN YOUR MESSAGE A BRILLAAANT! POEM MY LOVE. JUST OUTSTANDING.

WELL WRITTEN. I KNOW ITS TRUE CAUSE THE WORDS WOULD HAVE NEVER BEEN SO CLEAR TO ME AND VERY EASY TO PICTURE WHAT I HAVE READ.

MY WORDS, MY COMMENT (S) MY VERY WELL BE IN YOUR DIARIES ALL THE TIME.

I HAVE TO SEE ANBD READ MORE OF THESE.

SORRY IT TOOK LONG FOR ME TO ACTUALLY MAKE TIME TO STOP BY. LOL. NOW DAYS AS I GET OLDER THINGS KEEP COMING.

I PRAY THAT I AM ONE OF YOUR FAVS.

TAKE CARE. ALWAYS P!NK R0MANC3