Wow. sweetness poem.5/5
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Awesome poem.. However.. a lot of mistakes with puncuation and such, but if that's your style.. then so bet it. Thanks for yoru comment. 5/5.

This was so lovely...I liked the poem
keep it up4/5 bcoz of some mistakes in spelling..

Thx for ur comment on my poem..

Very good poem.....liked it alot

I love how the poem is so broken up. I also like how you said "my heart flutters like a thousand wings when you kiss me" That was a great use of imagery!

It'd flowed peacefully great work! 5/5

Amazing! ((5))

Wow its so gd very gd at expressing ur emotions i love it and just follow ur heart! 5/5

Aww its sweet
i loved it
great poem
5/5
=]
wen u put
my heart flutters like a thousand wings when you kiss me,
it reminded me of my ex boyfriend
i loved it
truely amazing poem

p.s thanks for commenting

Omg i love it
it reminds me of me and boyfriend
keep it up

This was an interesting style
but nevertheless I liked it
some errors in spelling. But whatever its all good

Great expression and i could feel the confusion, great one jsu tif you can put a few more rhyming it would be perfect:)

Very well witten i like the start the middle but i felt it could been a lil longer 4/5 :)

Awwww, sad, but something a lot of ppl (believe it or not) go through. very good.

This is sad but awsome poem...
Great job...

I LOVE! the bit - "my heart flutters like a thousand wings " in this poem! It is a wonderful expression. Keep up the good work!

Awe nice poem.... i think it really got me right in the hearti love how it says my heart flutters like a thousand wings love it! thats how i feel when i see a guy.. =]

keep writing dont waste time creativity is a virtue!

This was rather sad, but I loved it :]

5/5

Good stuff! Kinda expressive!

I like disz poem i can relate =]]