Still waters run deep as we can see your piece is. very deep . keep it up

Very beautiful picture you have painted for the minds eye. I can almost hear the sound of the waters as they purge forward towards the seas.

Unnerved waters minding not
Tripping blindly molding motifs
Caresses stretched over lapsing time
Arduous journey till home is reached

This is my favorite stanza.
Great job!
Take Care Cinjdy

Wow, your words are magical
you give such beautiful images.
Keep up the good work.

Lots of great adjectives, but I feel the imagery is overwhelmed by an over-abundance. Should be days that 'pass'. Not one "and," and only one "I"--I can see why Bob would love this poem! "Gentle ripling rapids" is an oxymoron. Rapids are not gently ripling. I appreciate the infinity you grant to rivers.

B-e-a-utiful picture painted. Thanks for the quick vacation, I needed that.

On the surface this seems to describe a flowing river, running its course, following its path, twisting and turning. It could also describe another journey too, life's journey!

Well done

Michael