This was a wonderful poem. I have no idea how that feeling is yet because im only 19 but I do know that they do grow up fast, becuase i've been threw something that does involve growing up and for myself. I hope something makes since out of that. =]

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Nicely written, I really enjoyed reading this, you showed how much children mean to you and also how its sometimes hard to see them grow up. Take care and keep writing! :)