This very good, sorry cause it sounds like you've had experience with guys like this.

Oh gosh. this is really great, and i know a lot of girls can relate to this. nice job hun.
5/5

"Says what he doesnt mean."
-You need a apostrophe in doesn't. :]

"Doesnt come home at night."
-Same thing as above. ^^

"But mostly, I hate it when a guy,
Says he loves me when he doesnt at all."
-Again, doesn't need an apostrophe.

Overall, this last stanza was my favorite of them all, because you explain all these things you hate that so many guys will actually really do.. and then out of alll the possible things a guy could do to make you mad.. this one makes you the most mad. Again, the repetitiveness of "I hate it when a guy..." was really effective and unique. It helped the flow of the poem roll along. Another excellently written poem that you wrote from your point of view about your opinions of the things you hate that guys do! Okay, before this gets way long, 5/5

Wow. I loved this. It was amazingly written, and you did a wonderful job.

"I hate it when a guy,
Only calls when you've got something he needs.

I hate it when a guy,
Expects you to get on your knees."

^^ I especially liked that. I thought it was funny, so it added a little humor to the piece. =]

5/5

-Briana

Ur poem is awesome!!...U gave some facts about guys and what we do really hate about them...
Good job,plz keep it up:)..

Guys are like this. well most of them that i've dating in the past or i have met and with their girlfriends, its B.S. you know. they should learn to respect us because we always do that to them. grr with guys lol. but you did a good job of writing this.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

I hate guys like that too! Especially the get on your knees part, ugh stupid boys and their ploys to keep a girl. Showering her with sweet words just to get some. Well blah on them because most girls deserve a guy that is there for them and loves them for them not for the things they do. Well done *5/5*

Hmmm, this sounds alot like Avrils song 'the best *amn thing' to me so i don't think it's very original... but if you actually came up with this on your own good job... I'm not going to vote

I hate that too!

great job!

<3 Aly

Love the repetitiveness of the poem, your words and contradictions are amazing and would have taken a while to think up to phrase it well. this was excellent. your time and dedication on this poem was evident.

5/5 David

Well I guess a lot of girls hate that... even me.. but as they say boys will be boys... no matter what they will remain like that...

wonderfully written... Really liked it...

Sometimes guys like us can be a bunch of dumbarses. The way your portray all sorts of faults that we have through your poetry was quite different. but i love the way you typed up the end " But mostly, I hate it when a guy,
Says he loves me when he doesn't at all.",
It does seem to be that most guys have that distasteful quirk but don't worry not alot of us do. Excellent work -
Raindrops 5/5