This i good......... i like the way u write it.......
keep up the gd workz.....:)

Wow i bet alot of ppl say that they no how u feel... but i bet they dont i mean this poem it shows that u want to let ppl see you! i mean other ppl might want that to but it diff for every one. well anys just wanted to say that was a good poem it had feeling and depth! way to go!

I absolutely love the lines
"Maybe you'll notice when I am gone
That I was never here to Begin with"

This is a really good poem. I like your style.