Wow. I loved this. It's very good. It's well written, and I like how it actually has meaning. It's based on things that happen everyday. People aren't careful to watch the words they use.

Great job.

5/5

-Briana

Anne, I thought this was a pretty fine poem. Words can really hurt
Words can break hearts

Your poem covers different dimentions of "words" and it all seemed sensible to me. I gave ya top marks for that.

Tc
Fsams

Anne, I thought this was a pretty fine poem. Words can really hurt
Words can break hearts

Your poem covers different dimentions of "words" and it all seemed sensible to me. I gave ya top marks for that.

Tc
Fsams

Fabulous poem! It really makes an apt point. I believe in diplomacy. Choosing your words carefully. So on that subject, your poem covers a lot. Good job. Honest Luck

Sarah

I loved the way you got yer message across so well.
this poem was lovely, i really enjoyed reading it.
i loved the subject you chose to, it was different, and different is good.
keep up the nice work!