Dropped from the skies

Lovely cuipdo, how lovely, u find always cupdio reminding u by love

Hmm. an intresting piece of writing specially last stanza, excellent piece of work

Soft white feature
dropped from the skies
I looked up at the skies
but I saw nothing
-what could it be?
^ Did you mean feather? I can imagine if a feather had been dropped from above, it would indeed be easily missed. Nice alluring question at the end too!

I walked in the summer fields
with a summer hat on my head
I felt a light touch on my shoulder
-was it a breeze of summer wind?
^I like the image you begin with. You may want to change one of the 'summers' as this is distracting. Maybe, 'I walked amongst the poppy field' something like that. A description of the field you are walking through. A question again. I like that! Again, you may want to use another word instead of two similar words. Such as ' Was it the quill or the summer's breeze?'

I was swimming in the lake
skies reflection was on the surface
I saw a beautiful light dancing on it
I felt something very warm touch my heart
^This is refreshing. Lovely imagery here, I can really see your thought process.

Are you still there
my little baby cupido
reminding me to loving him
when he is not here around
^This made me laugh out loud. 'my little baby cupido' I don't know what a cupido is, but it sure does sound cute. I smiled!! I am sure you meant to say 'reminds me to love him, even when he's not around'?

Well done Noor. Another wonderful write from you!

Michael