Hmm...Reminds me a tad of me for some reasons. >o> Starts whistling* Lol.

I liked it. I thought you did well with this poem and the title was awesome. :)

You did a good job of doing this. It's like what you want to tell someone, but jsut can't so you just replay it in your mind over and over again and hope someone else will say it for you. It was great. :)

Four out of five.

Ahhh Temps this has to my fave you've written by far! It just blew me awaaay, far far awaay of a place where a young girl wants to open her heart to love but is scared of being burned. BEAUTIFUL. The opening was truly captivating and you had me hanging on every word. You truly expanded your vocabulary here making it that much more interesting to read. The flow was just flawless and the meaning behind each phrase was deep. I know this came straight from your heart because I could truly feel the emotions you expressed. You should be proud of this piece hun. Amazing. *5/5*

Aw. This is sweet. I mean, it's sad, too, but it's sweet, as well. This piece seems as though it's really coming straight from the heart, and on to the paper, or the screen, in this case, haha. This piece is wonderful.

5/5

-Briana

Awww ... this is a sweet poem.. ahhhh the fear of rejection.. ive been there and still am lol. i hate to get rejected especially if the person is someone i really care about.. but if you never open up then you will never know what could have been.

beautiful poem...

definately 5/5

Oh, my GOSH!!! Could I please print this out and give it to this guy that I like?!?!? lol I'm just kidding, but seriously, this poem really reminds me of "our relationship". Wow, I really liked it (I'm sure you can tell)!

I like this poem of yours. its very good. 5/5

Wow, I love this!! The whole poems was so enjoyable to read and you had me wanting more by the end. I loved the whole idea of it, very cute, and you wrote it so wonderfully. Take care and nice work! :)

Love tis poem-its really well written! u gota talent neva stop writing! 5/5