Wow one of the most emotinal poems ive read all day. i loved every word. i could just feel the emotion.

Every time you close your eyes
I wish I was the shadow that you see in the dark
every time you show that smile
I look at you and fake a laugh
every time you walk alone
I wish you were holding my hand
whenever you are down
I wish I was the reason why

i loved that stanza a great begining. and it really stuck out. job well done! 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Wooow so lovely i've added to my favorite !Good job 5/5