Awwww so sweet lesthat.5/5
**harlea

Awww i really liked this it was simple and sweet. Good job!

First off, your title.. It's supposed to be You're instead of your.
Secondly, If I were you.. I'd captiolize your i's in your poem.. just because =)
Thirdly, there were some words that needed apostrophes like I noticed can't didn't have one.
annnd lastly, =] amazing write.. very beautiful!!!!
5/5 niceeee job