Nice job.

Nice use of language

Your poem is quite eloquent and wonderfully written. I enjoyed this very much. I now have a new favorite poet
thanks for sharing your gift

Ur poem is so awesome..it is perfectly written and u expressed it in a good way...I enjoyed reading it..
Keep up the good work..

Mind blowing piece youve got in here..A very short right but just like ur other poems, direct to the point with a lot of deeper and powerful meaning in it...I loved the idea that you were trying to portray here..U have the unique way of constructing a poem and u have a lot of unusual but wonderful ideas in you. Keep up the good work...

The dreams I had in mind
Will always be insane
When time appears with wings
My dreams had fade away

^^I loved these lines. There were times we tend to forget our troubles simply with being with friends and people who love us and then that bizarre dreams fade away…So short but well explained. A Very vivid image I got from these lines.

The clock ticks to twelve
My life has just begun
The words I have in me
Are those written in gray

^^ These lines, I have interpreted in two different ways which were both applicable. As transparent as it was, I would say you were trying to portray a person who is suffering from insomnia or sumthin...And when the night comes nuthin he/she could do but watching the time fly.. But I am more interested if it’s about a person who is in dilemma,I think it wpuld be more dramatic. Excellent Job..

My life, will always be
A night without a moon
All i'm trying to say
I'm just a fairy without tale

^^ I liked how you ended it. Very Simple but very powerful..Basically you ended up portraying the idea in your mind with ease it was cause you ended it marvelously. Good Job..xDD

I really like this poem !!!!!