I want

by nina   Jul 1, 2008


I want you to be
my world and my destiny
tell me promiss me
in my future you'll always be

i want you to be the on that my children will call him daddy
and ask him : do you love mammy
promiss me you're answer will be
she is me,i am she
how couldn't i love me ??

i want you to be the shoulder
that i will cry on it when life doesn't smile to me
so Sally ? promiss me ... say to me
you will never cry when I'll be

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Pretty strong feelings you seem attached to that one

    it is a great one jsut break int into 4 lines paragraoh i think it will be perfect then