Wow. Was this ever intense! It was wonderfully worded. You expressed your emotions sooo very well. I felt like you were screaming, which is really good! Those things you want to get off your chest.. :) You mispelled some stuff, but overall it was a really good poem that you expressed your feelings about war and life and different things. Well done. 4/5.

I like this poem....but i think that you should put in more stanzas and less exclamation points....lol but still..you put your creativity into it so therefore...its great!