by Katrina Jul 3, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I can't help but to feel like you were only interested in one thing |
by H E Losey
Not my style of writing poetry as there is no metre/rhythm required so I can't comment there. I did notuce a couple errors, line 9 "were" to "we're", line 12 "apart" to "a part". |