This is really good!
is this lyrics? or a poem?
well either was it was amazing. it had a really great flow to it too!
job well done, yet again =]

It is a great poem!!! I enjoy reading it, I know that dark feeling very well... 7/5 it should be!!!

I'll give it a four.

It was pretty good and I would love to hear it as a song.

You're kind of jumping around with punctuation, but I still got the gist of the song and I enjoyed reading it overall.

Great!! I loved it! You express your words beautifuly.:)

Pretty amazing :]
You really would be an awesome lyricist.
Someday this could be an amazing song :] :D

you write beautifully :D

5/5
awesome
keep it up.

Wow,
this is just an amazing write.
(:
5/5