Monochrome moonlight, is an intense image all in itself..damn!...as i read this piece the emotion that overcame me wasnt so much a "sad", but more like "lost & wandered"...your descriptions seemed so sincere and vivid, that i felt i was riding on your back, through your journey, every line was crisp and sharp and kept me on the edge of my chair waiting impatiently for the next one..the 3rd stanza was my fav., and i can't say enough about how much i enjoyed reading this, and it will be going into my favorites..you rock!
john

Astromomically enchanting with as awlays flawless flow it is indeed my pleasure to read your poems

I love this, I love you... whoever you are : b
anyways VERY well written and pleasing to the brain. excellent vocab and imagery, slighty abstract but at the same time full of connections and meaning. This is more like it, alot of the writers on this site are pretty bad but not you. Your extraordinary
a perfect 5/5 <3
pm me sometime : )
it would also be awesome if you could check out some of my own work, if it's no trouble

peace and love!