I'm not sure who you wrote this about, but I'm so sorry. I lost my boyfriend to suicide and it nearly killed me. I thought the emotions were all there and they weren't overdone. It was simple and sweet and completely mind bogglingly good. It was beautiful.

``First off, I loved the title. It caught my attention. :]

"Those stinging words,
were so painful the first time around."
``Oh wow.. Stinging words, wonderful word-choice!

``Rhyme is excellent so far. It's wonderful. The poem is flowing along nicely.

"Those few, simplistic tidings,
tore my life apart."
``Awh, sad.

""Don't let the bad things,
bring your life down.
Just keep that beautiful smile,
and please do not frown."
``Oh wow, this is very adorable for someone to say to you.

``Overall a wonderful poem. It was a sad poem, but definatly expressed things wonderfully all together. It was a amazing write, and everything rhymed very nicely and the flow was smooth. Well done, :) 5/5

Well bravo even a littel logn one ,
but it capture my attention and make me read them all and intresting specialy toward the end of it , and the last line , ltry and try

lovely ending

great work here

Wow, that was very impressive.
I'm going to add it to my "favorite poems"
It was amazing! So emotional, and sad.
Great write. See ya in the forums :)

Wow, that was very impressive.
I'm going to add it to my "favorite poems"
It was amazing! So emotional, and sad.
Great write. See ya in the forums :)

Wow. .this was absolutely beautiful. The first part made me smile, and as I read through it, I could feel tears coming to my eyes. The title of the poem particularly jumped out to me when i was reading through your list of poetry. I also particilarly liked the first stanza

"Your letters still comfort me
and help me through my reckless times.
Your handwriting so elegant,
the words have committed crimes."

I honestly can't find a flaw in the poem at all. A very nice job on this. 5/5

Very well written tradgic poem Reading this made me very emotional