Hey Brooke, It's Tasha! (: What I love The Most About This Poem Is It's Originality. It Seems Like Its Derived Straight From Your Heart, and It Really Stands Out. It's Good.

Yeah, Just Like The Last One. Its Your Honesty And The Way You Reach Out To The Reader That Makes You Unique. This Was Good Too. You Should Comment Mine Back!! (:

It is very beautiful it kinda hurt God exist he is really there. i know its not much coming from me ut i know God love you, hell probly more then me, yes keep on writing showh the world what you have i know you have it in you, now its time to prove it ot yourself.

your are young and so your heart is very breakable, but there is one out there just for you, some of Gods greatest gifts were unawnsered prayrs, i know from experience.

i love the writing and hope you continue it i cant wait to read more.