Very beautifully written

:)

I liked this piece a lot. I liked the emotion and the feelings behind it. It was well written.

5/5

-Briana

This is an amazing piece of work. Though sad each word so vividly describes your emotions and its hard for the reader not to be drawn into the same painful world.

I loved the ending! It just seemed to add so much more to the poem and was able to sum up everything so nicely. And especially thw words "bleeding mascara" - it was simply awesome! 5/5 from me