I loved the positiviness in this poem and the meaning behind it all. Yes take the risk and take the fall and whatever happens learn from it with no regrets. I think everything here was just great and I wouldnt chane a thing. Your message was clearly understand and you know I agree 100%. well done *5/5*

I adore this one.This is what more people need to read. We do need to learn from what happens. And we can't control it. I love how you said 'I'll lay my heart on the line' believe it or not that line just helped me. I'll have to put myself fully out there, to get the life lessons I need. Sure not everything will go the way i want it to, but time will heal, and i will grow from the expierences.

5/5

I like this poem alot... its very positive and confident.. sometimes you just have to sit back and let things fall in place.. your vocabulary choice was great. i enjoyed this one alot. 5/5

I love everything about this. It has a really positive message, and I like that. Made my day a little brighter =) I also adore your word choice - complex, but not so complex that it makes my head hurt, yunno??

Awesome job, 5/5
Caitlin =)

I liked how you used a mixture of extravagant and simple words. It adds just enough where it doesn't overwhelm or bore the reader. You're pretty good at free verse where most people have trouble with it. You're emotions definitely showed through, and I could feel what you were feeling.

----------> for three whole years...and let everything unwind.
`` I really liked this line, because it's very detailed and personal. It helps me think that this was is a true one, instead of just some made up thing. I always love personal details.

I know a lot of people can connect and relate to this, it's one of the many problems in everyday life. It's good to have a poem that people can relate to, because it evokes more emotion in the reader.

I really liked this. Great job! x]

Keep writing!
Cayce

I loved this. It's written perfectly, with the exception of a small spelling error, I believe --

"I'll lay my heart on the line
And disengage every feeling I've had kept obscure
for three whole years...and let everything unwind.
The concluding outcome is what I'll be contrived to deal with,
I'll have to put that smile back on my face- regardless,
and live my life the way I was perviously to liking you."

^^ "perviously" should be "previously", I think.

Again, your word choice is amazing. The piece is wonderful. :]

5/5

-Briana

First of all, I love the title. Secondly-est (I know I made it up.. I have a tendency to do that..) this poem was the shizz.

"And disengage every feeling I've had kept obscure"

Personally I think if you just type out the whole word here (have if you're slow like me..) it would sound a lot better.. but thats just me.

Anyway.. wonderful job. 5/5 from me hunn.

That was amazing!
I really can relate to you poem.. well, a great part of it..
Good word choice.
Well done!
Take care

I understand what you feel but this write reads like prose to me. Like a letter written following that breakup.

Really true words n the caption is perfectly apt for the poem.

I liked the word choice n the reasons that u have depicted in ur poem abt why we shouldnt regret n continue smiling.
superb.
tc
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