When I Saw You First Time

by Concrete Angel   Jul 6, 2008


When I saw you first time,
You were standing near beach and watching sunshine,
I fall in love with you in that pleasant time,
My heart-beats started sounding like wind-chime.

When I saw you first time,
I just wanted to talk to you,
So, that I can express my feeling for you,
That I'm in love with you.

When I saw you first time,
I just wanted to say that,
Don't make your heart like a garden,
So, that everyone walks in,
But make it like a sky,
Which everybody wishes to touch,
But only moon can stay on it.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Theses lines are absolutely beautiful .... and so is your poem, Lol....

    "Don't make your heart like a garden,
    So, that everyone walks in,
    But make it like a sky,
    Which everybody wishes to touch,"

    You have a talent for writing that touches the heart.. Well done!

    Lol,
    Olwin.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very romantic... Nice write!

  • 17 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Gr8 work...keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is absolutely beautiful pam. I like these words"Don't make your heart like a garden,
    So, that everyone walks in,
    But make it like a sky,
    Which everybody wishes to touch,
    But only moon can stay on it". Very well done, kel.

  • 17 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well written Pam, you have expressed love in a lovely way
    Your poem was most pleasant to read ,well done

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