Hey your poem is REALLY good
i put it in my favorite poems :D

Keep it up :)
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This poem was so sad...none the less I simply loved it...You have extreme talent but I hate to know that it took something like this to make you use it...may the sun shine for you on dark days in the future ;) 5/5

Nice write. enjoyed it! sad but a good one!

Hey i love ur peom<3 i am/was in da same sitution n it rily helped//. good job :]

Very nice written!!! it flowed very good. i like the way you kept every other line of each stanza rhyming...
This poem reminds me of my first love... and pretty much the same happened..

It's nice to hear you moved on. i did too...

Anyway like i said i really like this poem.
Keep it up!

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

A true poem about love and how hard it is to break up with somebody that you truly love. written well with so much emotion, 5/5. Em