Thats really good... sometimes things happem it doesmt mean there has to be a reason, things happen sometime for no reason

I love this poem it is very great

Some of this was forced and just felt like lines thrown together. i must admit that i did like the start though, it was well put.

keep trying, you do have talent. bring it out. 5/5 david

I think one those worst feelings in the world is not being able to be with the one you love, or that person not loving you the same way....its so heart breaking, undescribeable...beautiful poem, seemed like there was an aswer to heart break

Sorry about your lost im kinda in the same perdicument but i cant seem to let her go though .

I ask God up above to help me get over you
He smiles at me and says trust me
Child I will see you through.

^^ that line was my fav. This poem, it is awesome. It has so much emotion (again) and it flows though perfectly and ur rhyme scheme was really excellent in this poem. Really enjoyed the read. 5/5

I ask God up above to help me get over you
He smiles at me and says trust me
Child i will see you through.

Love this stanza.When God said that he will see you through, you can count on him to do so.He never leave us to bear our burdens alone.
Much emotions expressed in this piece.
Take care,
Paul...

Very strong writing with a depth of emotion. Loving is never wrong. 5/5.