All Great till the last stanza. Not sure if you meant to or not. You stopped talking from third person back to first. Great poem and thought though. . 5/5

Ive notice some errors in here..like reft to rift....and i think youve mentioned awaken several times in here....But i liked the idea of the poem about a girl and a boy..There was a touch of sweetness and cuteness...and i liked as well how youve mentioned your dedication with your last line...xDD