I can understand this poem.
theres times when i just want my mum to stop being the judge and the ctitic and start being my supporter and fan, stop trying to make my life what hers wasn't.

I like how you've written it. very well done.
5/5

Omg this poem is just amazing i swearr.....
it really touched my heart
well hun keep it up
gr8 writing:)

lili