Wow, Gabby. This was breath taking and heart wrenching all at the same time. I don't have time comment this with detail, but the title caught my attention and I just -had- to read it. I don't know how you come up with these titles that just seem to draw me in.

-----> Suicide's your sweetest drink,
but babe, I prefer champagne.
`` That line is definitely going to be stuck in my head for a while. Amazing.

-----> Ya, you know you wanna do it,
you're just so tired of pulling through it.
`` Do you realize you rhymed it with it? Lmao. It's okay, it didn't ruin the flow or anything, it was just a little funny. x]

Keep writing!
Cayce