Wonderful write.. the first stanza really captivated me..
good word choice...

The flow was off a little bit in some places... but I like the meaning attached to the poem..
You have described it so very well...

We're glued in a fictional world;
no one will tolerate honesty.
They ignore all of the dilemmas we face;
because actuality is what makes them shudder the most.

^^Wow... I loved the last stanza.. so powerful...

Good write.. keep writing...

"They refuse to accept the problems with this life;
because truth is what they fear the most."
-Wow. This is absolutely true! Lots of us I think are like this.

I love how you say We're...... and then you say They...... you continue this throughout the whole poem.. which is a good idea. [If you know what I even mean.]
Then you end the last line in each stanza with most, and that continues throughout the whole poem, and I think it works very nicely. :]

"They deny what can be confirmed;
because truth is what they fear the most."
-Yup. I was like totally nodding my head to everything you said. It's true.

Overall, a really good poem that I believe is very real and true. Great work. 5/5.

The message of your poem is one i have heard quite alot but i still liked it. Your flow was pretty good and i could here your voice.
However to me it lacked orginality but i mean no insult to u. nice poem overall^^

I really like how you repeted World and Most...and the idea of being in a cycle that we cant get out of.

it is very well writen and is true to so many ppl. many are hiding, lost, in a cycle.

5/5

I really like this poem. It can be so true sometimes. I think that the title that you chose is very appropriate and it makes a lot of sense... Good work. 5/5

~Ravey!

Ok , let me say this i like the day you say in every paragraph a part where we live but
it need more rhyming becasue it seem it si not rhyming and more the structure of the stanza in teh paragraphs are not the same ,

i belve it is a good to start poem and a good topic but it need more work to be prefected

I agree with all that this great free verse poem says. You really have the gift of poetry
I love free verse but have not mastered it as you have
5>>>>>

Oh, I really like the topic of this poem, and I think you did a good job of delivering it with your words, but the flow was a bit off in places.
It could be better, but it's really good all the same.

I never thought of the fact that people are actually scared of the truth! I definitely would agree with that statement. Well said! I loved the ideas in this poem. Great write!

Great word choice, it kept the reader very interested in the poem, great start and great finish!

5/5