Comments : Please don't....

  • 15 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    BRILLIANT poem, I loved it hun and I added it to my faves :-) Short but so full of emotions and I can easily relate.....Brigthers days are yet to come, just wait and see :-)

    Love you *Sabbi*

  • 15 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    **Please no longer look at me
    The way you always do
    I think it's been made quite clear now
    I could never be with you **

    the last stanza was just breathtaking.. so much emotion could be felt..
    as if you took the words from your heart. Exactly what you were feeling.
    and as always , such a wonderful poem n_n

    take care

  • Bravo!Bravo!I can relate to this as I am sure many others can.Your word choice was simply put and your flow was smooth and easy to read.5/5


  • 14 years ago

    by jojo88

    Nice i know the feeling 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Awww this poem is sooo sad and beautiful like all your other poems (:

    Please don't say you love me
    If you know it's just a lie
    Please don't just hang around
    It only makes me want to cry

    That line I can relate to and I'm sure others can too

    Loved the read just wow!!!!

    5/5 from me darl(: