Inspiring poem... with element of sadness in it... encouraging to dream on even if there is pain...

"Life is too short; too simple
Dream on; go on
Every dream has an act to follow
and it all starts with you. "

^^ so very true... the last two lines are very motivating...

Wonderful write...
keep writing...

You really touched me with this poem, and it was all so very inspiring. It had a deep meaning and clear message.

""Dream on dear child.
you have so much to live for
dig deep into your mind and fetch the desires
seep into it's everlasting core."

Love the words you use, and that last line^, is really good! This whole poem is unique and I think it is very well-written and heartfelt. Nice work, keep writing!