Wooow, it was so touching and so sad, but very powerful.
Good job5\5.

Your sadness can be felt in your words. It really tugs at the heart.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy

GREAT job, get thinking on our project, well done again xP

A masterpiece of urs.. I can't say more.:-)
Like it very much for all the noble meanings that it carries.. 5/5

A really nice poem..so touching and the message of the poem is really true...

well done...

5/5

It's sad and I think that there are many people who could relate to it. Great word use 5/5

Sasha.
Awesome job.
It really makes one think, and i thank you for that. It was really good, keep writing.
The flow was amazing,
*Chaotic Angel*

OH that's so sad and deep every line is filled with intense emotions :(
i'm sorry you had to go through this but glad u got to express ur sadness so vividly that it brought tears to my eyes

This is a very sad poem indeed I'm guessing tt the person whom you're writing about is ur dad? Though you didn't mention him, the whole content all points to him to be protagonist of the poem.

I love the way when you said:

I just don't want to add you to the list
Of those who I talk to in the sky

Here it clearly indicates you don't want ur Dad to go to the place where all ur love ones has gone...

tearjeaking indeed
but its all worth it
great job
5/5