This is a good poem. Full of alot of pain though, its so understandable in many ways.

the last words she whispers
"i hope he roots in hell"
do you think he'll understand
why they ring my funeral bell

roots should be rots though

Wow babe this is really deep n has a lot of sadness its amazing.a lost little girl giving up her fite 4 justis is hard but pushing back and holding on 2 a better future n not letting them take nemore of your life can be better neways hope ur ok??? pm me wen u can lvya

stacey xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

I reeeeeally love this poem, even tho it's evil and disgusting. You wrote it and the pain just... it's sad. 5/5 and it's going to my fav-list
take care
~Em

5/5 i love it