Dont copy past from word files !! see the frist line their is a word not comprehend

Mm over all you need to knwo poems have paragraphs or structure and they have rhyming

have both to have a prefect one if you like read one of mine you nwill now what i mean if you dont

This is a good poem, but I didn't feel anything from it. Not much emotion in your poem at all.

I liked it, but there's not that much emotion involved. I'm sure that if you put a little more detail it'll be perfect. =]

I love the last lines
keep it up
5/5

I like this poem it.
it relates to me at the moment my and my boyfriend just broke up and he said i ment everything to him so i don't know whats a lie and whats the truth anymore..
Keep up the good work
5/5
xx Hope
Take care

I liked it, although i agree with the above comments from Jaimee and amber, if you described it a bit more, and added a bit more emotion, it would be better. But its a great writ, just again, the paragraph formation. But i liked it apart from that!. 5/5x

Once again there is feeling
but all else is lacking
the rhyme is all EEE sounds and you use ME too much
and rhythm is not even present
3/5