The 1st time.

by XoXoBriannaoXoX   Jul 11, 2008


At the time i met you.
i knew it was meant to be.
i couldnt help but smile when u said
"you loved me!"

i always laughed when
you called me your
baby pookie pie.

but a few days later
i couldnt help but cry.
you said it was over.

and i still dont see why
is it because shes better then me?
or is it all a lie?

all i know is that you made
a mistake.
and its not my fault.

that you put me through all
this pain.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Brennan P

    The ending needs to be changed a bit and the genre but it was very good

  • 15 years ago

    by Four Letter Lie

    Yeah... this person relli broke your heart. you dont diserve it. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jahi Lovv

    Wow that was so beautiful

  • 15 years ago

    by Alicia Jane

    I like this poem but.. after a few days and a guy says he loves you.. then leaves you, obviously it means they never had strong feelings and feelings of love cant be there the first time u meet someone... but u may like them..

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Well trhis one is way better then the previous
    structure is good and some rhyming soo this one is a good improvment

    keep up

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