Comments : Life

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "There bad time and good time"

    sould be: "There is bad times and good times"

    "There a path you got take"

    I think this would sound better: "There's a path you have to take"

    "But can you find the way before time run out"

    ^run should be runs

    Overall, there was lots of grammar mistakes, and I really think you could go back and work on this a lot more. It was pretty short and I think a lot more could be said on this subject.

  • 15 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    True!!