A collage of nursery rhymes well done with a clever twist
Very beatifully written and sweet ending after wonderful laghter
5/5

Amazing poem!! :] 5/5

You started so well and then your rhymes went off into another place(stanzas 5,7,8,10)
Watch you metre/rhythm as some lines are very wordy and the beat is lost. ie:
"Next comes Cinderella sweeping the house
Singing songs to the usual mouse.
Wishing to meet the Prince at the ball,
Fairy godmother hearing her call."
as always an opinion

Wow. I like this poem a lot!
It brought a smile to my face.
Thanks!
Good poem.
5/5
-Justina

This is very delightful and wonderful! ^^, it made me smile with a great conclusion. . wonderful!