Personally I prefer something a bit more metaphoric or descriptive but you wrote this nicely as well.
I prefer the ending to the beginning, as the beginning is a little too personal, a little too "I, you, we" kind of thing. But hey, we all write poems to vent and it works damn well.
Another good poem, 5/5

jess ~

This was a great write. it held lots of meaning. very deep and very pure. you got your message across well.

For you I wish the torture you've put me through.
Blood, sweat and gore in your most beautiful dreams.
Scars and bruises, painful memories and badges.

i loved that stanza the most. it really brought the whole poem together. this was amazingly written, can't wait to read more of your work. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.