Frist, i would say , i know your feelings, second , i would say , about this poem 2 part ,
you should break it into paragraphs and then doo some rhyming to it , to be ok

second ,
all htat talk about drugs and sad and leaving and lying , jsut make me sad of you to be soo weak to deal with this,

girl love is beautifull and pretty thing , dont mess it and mixe it with drugs,

love is a pure thing and represent the truth between 2 , not the lying ,

it is not a misunderstanding it si simply not love

The title of the poem attracts me.......
good poem.........
well done keep writing.... hope to read more of ur poem soon.=)

It shows how the window has reflected your emotion towards this person. I love it.

~Chinwe~
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