This is really cute, very meaningful:

"Like the sun hidden behind the clouds,
My love is sometimes out of view."

^My favorite part, worderd perfectly!!

I like how you use similes in this poem, makes it really good.

So nice work, keep writing! :)

This is breath taking!
i love it!
well written!

I loved this poem, short but cute! 5/5 keep on writing! =)