Awww! jen he is gonna love this! it was sooo beautiful! 5/5
**harlea

Awww so sweet. young love lol. this was great jen and he will love it. he might even melt.5/5
** lesthat

"I'll run my hand across your wrist
to heal the spots where the knife kissed.
Let me take away the suicide note
and unwrite all the hateful things you wrote."

Ah-maaaaazing :)

This is such a great poem! Keep writing, dont stop. Great job. 5/5

I remember the third stanza from when you were showing Bliss it =]
I love your poems about Tom, they're so deep and meaningful, it makes me feel all fuzzy ^__^

This was really a great poem.. shoving that you are a very sweet person. :] Ummm, honestly.. all your poems are amazing. You seem to make them all flow beautifully and have a awesome rhyme that stays consistant throughout the entire poem. Just keep up the great work. 5/5.

Wow amaizing i want a girl to do that to me i want to change the sky color somtimes:)

wonderfull i will add it to myu favorite too

and when you said where the knif kissed jsut amaizing

bravo
* applause

I like this poem it is a beautiful song of love

I love this poem I really do its really touchy (^_^) keep up your wonderful work (^_^) 5/5

That was pretty good. ;)