Wow. This is so, so very deep. Whoever you wrote this for is extremely lucky to have a friend like you who cares so much.

He let go of life
He's slowly dying
He stopped believing
He gave up trying

^^Favorite line by far. It sent up chills as soon as I read that stanza. Perfect Raychil. I can't critize anything on this piece because everything about it is perfect; the stanzas, the flow, the word choice. Everything was beautiful. 5/5

<3 Loni