Wow... It really sounds like a fantastic song to me!
I don't have words to express it, but your poem flowed so well that I could even sing it in my head. The emotion in this lyrics was pouring from every word, and I can relate so much..

Well, let's see, you did a wonderful work with the chorus and the change in the last one really caught my eye. Some songs often bore when the same chorus is repeated and repeated... But here, I was really not expecting this and then you surprised me; wow, great job!

The last thing I'd like to mention was that I particularly loved the ending:
'Remember that I'm already gone...
But, you're the one who left'
Yes, perfect^^!

Keep this up, 5/5!
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Thats right he is the one who left what a dumb ass to leave someone as special as u!!!! i love u and u are my bff love always caleb!

Wow! omg i loved it really great song! well done 5/5

Loves it. 5/5