OMG u read my mind u really did every since my sister comitted suicide i've felt like that, you are amazing keep writing whats in ur heart its beautiful

I really like the way you ended this, it is my favorite part, though the whole piece just speaks so loudly of the pain of loss. I think you did a really nice job with this. I also like the 3rd stanza, beautiful work.

I really love this poem, and it portrays such sadness and pain that you are facing. Your word usage was great and the flow was flawless. Great job with this, take care!