And you can't see the blue sky
Because of the polluted air.

How about this:
And you can't see the blue sky
because of the smog that fills the air

Just a suggestion:) Your poem is very beautiful anyway!

Hugs and take care,

5/5 Ingrid

I think you should choose a new home then

lol

but i am not sure about the smog or smoke?

Good work!
5/5

lu

Very good poem. and its true everywere.

5/5

~tia

This is beautifully written with so much insight from such young eyes.
At first I found it to be a sad poem until I read the final verse.
You seem to have insight into deeper meaning than most your age and many that are much older I would love to follow the growth expressed in all you write---JIM 5/5

Hey ! Thank you for your comments, and guess what? You're on my favourite authors lists as well. You're young, but you're poems are extremely compelling. Good Job, Young Lady :) I fully support ya. Walah