Great poem! I loved it. Will you ever reach 100 years and still moving on? This is like that five for fighting song. Fantabulous, 5/5!

This is definately my favourite it's an amzing poem, your an amazing poet, and your overall an amazing person! KUDOS to you!

Hello allo. I kjnow you probobly wont get this anytime soon but i figured i'd leave a comment. Once again an amazing poem. I'd be curious to see how well ya do with other forms of poetry. Personaly i find being adventurous with structure and rhyming scheme help with the creativity. The only thing as far as constructive critisism goes, is that your line length varies from 6 sylables to 14 lol. Your sense of flow is great but having more even line lengths helps establish a solid rhyming scheme and makes the poem as a whole seem to flow much better. Love the poem and love the author :P. I miss you