WOW THAT WAS BUEATIFULLY WRITIN......AND I CAN FEEL YOUR EMOTION

I really liked this poem.

great job

5/5

Your poem is great ..
i appreciated it ..

Nice job really decriptive!

Im quite surprised how this piece recieved a 4. Honestly i think it deserves more than that. Flows perfectly as usual and great rhyming as well. Ive read two of you works and i can say, you're a good writer. Everything that comes from the heart and out of experiece is priceless. Good job again on this.