I like it but the end No matter what I will be your friend until the very end, even if it means losing you a million times...

Hmm.. that was good. Just a few tips, if you put a comma for the 4th No matter I think you should put it in for all of them. Read the poem aloud to yourself. It was a great poem overall but you should space out the lines more. It felt as if you just wanted to smush each line with what came out at the same exact time. Other than that it was good.

-Dan