Comments : One gun, one bullet

  • 13 years ago

    by claire

    Dude that poem rocks!! :D

  • 13 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Who the emotion in this people is exhilarating! This poem is so awesome. But if this is how u feel just remember to keep ur head up. Everyone has problems we just got to live through them tho thats how we get stronger...

  • 13 years ago

    by HearMe

    This is amazing. im putting you on my fave list. the emotion and truth that seep from your words is almost unbearable. i love this poem, how it is both personal, and questioning the world and its blind eyes. really beautiful, it made me stop and think about everyone i know who has been given the cold shoulder, and the many more that i have no met, yet. wonderful write. i sincerely hope this is something that you dont feel, and if you do, im deeply sorry for that. life does go on, and evenutally the memories and pain will pass and be faded time remnants. sorry getting preachy
    hope everything is alright!
    take care!
    keep on writing! <3