Very well written piece. :) Powerful. Expressive. I loved the words you used.. you did an outstanding job. 5/5

Nice. this was a great read and had emotions put behind it. great job.5/5
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This was so good. 5/5

Wow this was deep. and so beautiful too! very detailed and well written. i love the title and what the poems about, very unique.

Soaring the sky together above heavens flight
As they sail the clouds among the ocean of winds
Where the blaze of their love burns eternally bright
As they feel the heavenly love they share within

i love that stanza the most. it made the poem come together. this was a very creative piece. loved it all. 5/5.

-Ashlei.